I was immediately engaged here but left with so many questions. Is this part of an ongoing series? I love how you started with your mother’s passing and the surreal experience of losing a parent and having to go through their stuff.
Nice work! You have a great sense of rhythm with your words. Enjoyable read, captured the POV's emotions well. Will be following for the rest of your short stories.
Very nice. I look forward to reading more.
I was immediately engaged here but left with so many questions. Is this part of an ongoing series? I love how you started with your mother’s passing and the surreal experience of losing a parent and having to go through their stuff.
Nice work! You have a great sense of rhythm with your words. Enjoyable read, captured the POV's emotions well. Will be following for the rest of your short stories.
What an ambitious project! This one is so well done — the details and the restraint.
Really lovely and nostalgic. Felt like remembering an old memory.